Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Blog 4 "Chapter 4: Painted Faces and Long Hair"

Jack was off and said he would take care of the fire, him and his hunters and so they were off. The problem was that he didn’t he came back with a dead pig. But let me just explain to you how this all started, and how the biggest rescue went by us. Well malevolent Jack had told me that he and his so called hunters were going to keep the fire going. But from my sources after a while Jack had left the fire and so did his hunters and them left and got clay. They painted there faces with fruit and leaves they, it turned out they were actually off putting on their preposterous makeup they forgot about the fire, and Simon was gyrating until then he saw a ship go by and when I turned to look at the fire there was no smoke coming out and from that point on they had gotten in big trouble with the chief. Know they had come back with a dead pig, Jack said he had cut the pigs throat and he looked like he really wanted to take the credit and leave his hunters without any credit. Turns out I didn’t care about the pig, I cared about how or when we were going to be rescued and the chance just flew us by all because Jack wanted to be a hero and take a little of my attention. The irrelevance he had showed was so noticeable, although after that he looked at me and his opalescence apology didn’t look like he really cared about anyone other than himself. Although his incredulous hunters didn’t even look like they cared about what Jack had said. While this implication between me and Jack was going on Piggy looked like he was daydreaming of into a mirage. It looked like these two boys were whimpering while our discussion was going on although nobody really paid any attention. The shrill that was going on between these boys that looked like they really missed their family. But after when these events acquired the problem was that they all had problems with missing their parents. But when they talked over a lot of the problems on the island, I was still disappointed with Jack on how the fire on the mountain was off, and there was no smoke and the ship had left the horizon and now no one would be able to see the ship again. Know our only chance of survival had been less and less everyday. Know what we are going to do, our chances just slipped by because of Jack and his hunters, and know they just have there own club of people that hate the chances that had been accounted for. But know I know that sooner or later the ship might come back and we might have the right to see our parents again and return to a place were there is civilization and our parents that we’ve known for a long time.

1 comment:

daniel said...

you really do a great job in showing how jack and his so called hunters are iresponsible so i really liked that and also the description

see ya manyana daniel