Tuesday, February 26, 2008
Blog 9 "Chapter 10: The Shell and the Glasses"
It was morning the day after Simon murdered by such people. That day I can not bare to remember, the horror and total murder. Inside everyone they all knew it was true, there was a shudder running down my entire body. I could feel the presence of the day before, the total murder. Something no one could bare to believe anyone could ever do. Other than Jack knows because he was now the villain the one who could hurt people and the bad guy in the entire island. It was becoming morning and everyone started to get up, I was the only one that saw the sun’s phosphoresce that day. I felt like I was the only one that could remember that no one did anything to save our friend Simon, that none of us could help him. It was dark and there was nothing to see, but in the end we weren’t really the ones that killed Simon because someone had shouted out that there was someone coming out of the forest unfortunately no one knew it would be Simon. I heard someone coming, I turned around and saw Ralph he was awake. He said hello and quickly made gestures at me, I asked him what he was doing and he said he was trying to breathe in the air that had that beach scent. We started talking about what had happened the day before, he said he went to Jack’s party but he said he had not participated although he did say that he went and I knew he had also participated in the dancing. I’m not that sure if he participated in the stifle of Simon but I am sure he went to the party. Everyone knew Simon that day was being smothered by the rest of the people that were around him and almost everyone at the party. But there was more to say so we just left our conversation on how both of us attended the party but had nothing to do with Simon’s death. Then we say Samneric, they were both by the lagoon. They told us that they had collected rained on wood for the fire. But we had also asked them about the party last night they told us the same thing that we had concluded on, with me and Ralph that we had that same conversation that same day in the morning and it was close to afternoon that day. But it was getting close to night time and the fire was out. There was no way to start a fire without wood that was dry. Since it was close to night time everyone was getting tired until the only ones left that were still not asleep were me and Ralph. But our eyes started to get tired and really wanted a good night sleep. Ralph started to close his eyes and went to talk to me, but I stayed up and kept hearing noises. They were coming from outside I told Ralph to quite down but by the time he did they had already hurt us. They had taken the most important thing that was giving me eyesight. Yes just like you hear it they had taken my eye glass. But know I couldn’t see and they had also hurt us. I asked who that was it was Jack and two hunters that come with us. The truth is that we had been almost ambushed by Jack and two hunters.
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I could feel the presence of the day before, the total murder.
This really struck me as a good sentence, I like how you said I could FEEL the day before.
try to use less of the same word.
:)
Leyla
"They had taken the most important thing that was giving me eyesight. Yes just like you hear it they had taken my eye glass."
This was one of my favorite parts of your blog because it really made me feel like part of the story how Piggy talks to the reader. I noticed though a few mistakes, but everyone has mistakes. So Great Job!
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