I was reaching an island the one I was sent to because supposedly there were young boys that landed here on a car crash. I was sent on a mission to see if I could find anyone actually on this island. But right know I still hadn’t made it I was close by there, my captain on the radio telling me to elaborate were I was exactly at the moment. I told him I was about twenty minutes away. At first I thought these people were crazy, they were just a bunch of kids, obviously I knew that they all had something to do with the crash. Know I was arriving we dropped anchor, and know I could hear an ululation of boys coming near and a fire. It turned out there was a boy running out of the forest and a bunch of little children and big kids running out of the forest too. They were all carrying spears as if they were going to kill the boy that was running ahead of them. I was trying to heave the boys that had spears and they started to cry of course they put down there spears and they were all, scared of me. But they had no reason to be because I wasn’t here to hurt them on the contrary I cam to rescue them and help them escape this horrible experience for them. There was a cower between all of them and like I said they were all probably visualizing that I was going to hurt them. But I wasn’t and they were all scared of me. The boy in the front that came out running out first was so badly hurt and bruised was bleeding all around. I asked if they had crashed on the island, they all said they had and on the way I asked them for there names. One of them couldn’t really tell me his name, but in the end on of his friends, the boy that was running ahead of the pack of the rest of the boys was telling me on the way back home that his name was Percival. I kept asking them if they remembered the name of the plane or when the plane crashed and what were the survivors names and also who were the ones that died and their names. But they had tried so hard to remember and the boys that were crying that were carrying spears, they told me that they were trying to hurt the boy that had come out of the forest first. But it wasn’t that it was that they were crying because it looked like they did something wrong. But they never did tell me what it was, they had told me it had to do with rocks and hard civilization problems. But even then I didn’t understand, at first I though they were crazy but they weren’t they were just misunderstanding and were scared and didn’t really know what to tell me other than, telling me that they were happy that I had rescued them on time before someone else would have died.
Thursday, February 28, 2008
Blog 11 "Chapter 12: Cry of the Hunters"
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"I was reaching an island the one I was sent to because supposedly there were young boys that landed here on a CAR CRASH."
Its a plane crash btw. But other then that I found your story intresting and describtive. Just look over a couple minor mistakes.
I really like your blog but there are some minor mistakes that you should check. I say just read your blog outloud to some one or have some one look over it for you. Other than that I really enjoyed your blog it really pulled me in to the story.
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