Wednesday, February 27, 2008
Blog 10 "Chapter 11: Castle Rock"
It was day and the sun was coming out it felt so hot and heavy on your skin. It almost felt like there was to much of it's rays hitting you in the face. Everyone was up and Ralph was just siting on the beach, Piggy was still blind and without his glasses. As you already know the one that stole the glasses was Jack and he also took our fire and made it so that we don't have fire anymore. We had no fire and everyone was worried about how there was no fire for cooking and we could only eat fruit. Piggy started arguing with Ralph about how he couldn't see and how we didn't have any fire neither on the mountain or on the beach it was all gone. When they came over they were telling me and sam that they were planning to go to find Jack and the hunters and to tell them to give piggy back his glasses. The next thing we know were at the place were simons dealth was and they wern't there. It turned out we had to keep going to find Jack. Until then the sun hit us do hard it practicly made our skin a bronze color. We kept walking and found them it turned out there new location were they were was at Castle Rock were they had know a sort of fort and had shelter and also food because they hunted for pigs and then cooked them. Then Jack was right behind Ralph and it looked liek Ralph was a little scared to see him right behind him, it was like there he was breathing down his spine. Then Jack sent for me and sam to be held by some of the boys from our own choir that were our friends before but know where wour enemys. Then Jack starts to tell all of us to leave because this part was his part of the island. Ralph started to get really red and mad and so did Jack so they started to hurt each other with spears. So piggy kept reminding Ralph that we were just here to want his glasses. Until we all heard a big sound coming, but piggy couldnt hear and so he was lost and didn't know were to go so unexpectidly he got crushed by a big rock and was dead. Me and sam were then forced to be with Jacks or else he would kill us and we were scared so all we new to do was to not even have hope for anyone because Ralph was gone and know we were left alone all together. But well I was thankful that at least eric was with me because if he wasnt I would probably be the scardest person alive. Also not be able to be at least alive for too long. I wonder will we ever see Ralph again, and if we do will we ever be rescued from the evil clutches of Jack and his tribe?
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. Until then the sun hit us do hard it practicly made our skin a bronze color.
Onca again I am impressed by one of your many sentences. I enjoy that you put time into your blog.
Who's point of view is this?
:)
-Leyla
I loved the description in your blogs, but this blog was suposed to be in the WE perspective of both Sam and Eric but It's a good story! =D
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