Tuesday, January 29, 2008
Blog 2 "Chapter 2: Fire on the Mountain (Revision)"
When the fire on the mountain we had made warped and became fire and was surrounding the entire island. I felt very scornfully when Jack yelled at me, it wasn’t my fault because I hadn't done anything and already jack was yelling at me and everyone was staring at me. I hated being stared. Everybody already knew the dreadful name I didn't want to be called and know I'm going to be called that way for a long time. By the time I was at in the forest the tumult of little children that were on the mountain was over. I was nimble once everyone came back from the mountain and found out that the fire was burning and was having smoke come up from the Volcano. Sometimes I felt Jack felt very irresistible once he had the power to be at Ralps side since he was the chief. When I wanted to state my perspective of this incident that had occurred everyone turned to look at me as if I was the person in charge of having the fire on the mountain, my idea. I bet Ralph inside was officious about me telling him that I kept having the conch and that I wanted to speak. I know that Jack doesn't like me but he really should give me a chance, I mean he just judges me by my name. I knew I should have never told Ralph the name I had always hated being called. But I know that one day something will happen, because I haven't shown the other side of me. I don’t blame everything on Jack or Ralph or even the little children. But the problem is that Jack doesn’t like me, Ralph wants to look good with everyone and doesn’t give me a chance to explain, everything I try to say. They just look at me because of what I look like and what they call me, I bet if they called me a different name I might be known as someone better. But most of the time I have to be called Piggy. I think that sometimes my real friends are the little children, because they are the first ones I met and they like me for who I am. I think that sometimes Ralph can help me with the situation that I am in; I think he should take actions for his own responsibilities if only I can try to have him think like I do. I also think that Jack should try to help other people other than his choir group, I also thought about ho he named his troops hunters and the little children don’t get a name. I mean not like they know they can have one I’m just saying what if they do want one. I think it would be nice if they did. When I think about how Ralph as a leader isn’t really doing much it makes me think about how his leadership in this island as chief doesn’t fit the guy that I met in the forest before he even blew the conch.
Friday, January 25, 2008
Blog 1 "Chapter 1: The Sound of the Shell"
I was terrified once I appeared on the island. The first I was to speculate around to see if I can find other people on the island. Then I tried to jumble to try remember faces that appear in my mind. Once I was had finished trying to find out what was happening I tried to see if there was any decorous food to eat. Once I found something to devour on, fruit I kept looking around. I heard clamors comming from everywhere. I was walkign around and my indignation came to me and it was hard to find myself alone, until I started palloring and I all I could feel was warmth on my check. I clambored through rocks and trees, I stoped and saw a beautiful lagoon right next to the sea. I couldnt believe it maybe I could survive, but I still hadent seen anyone. Until I saw someone comming and I was scared I ran and was hidding behind a rock right next to the lagoon, until two boys came over to the lagoon. One was chubby and was talking to this skiny guy, it seemed like they knew each other. That's when I remebered there faces, and started remembering the reason why I was stranded inn an island in the first place. Our plane had crashed and we were stranded, and obviously so where they. When I interposed into their conversation they screamed, I told them not to be so they came out of the trees they were hiding behind and askes for my name. I replied quitly and they told me their name, the skinny one vainly said his name was Ralph and he said that the chubby one next to him was Piggy. I said hi to both of them and it seemed Ralph was very mad, so then I asked them how long they had been on the island. They said that they didn't know so I told asked them how they got here. they where both very strident. They said their plane had crashed and I told them that mine did to. So then we found out we were from the same plane. But since I was a girl and they were guys we werent aloud to talk to each other, then that's how I met them. There was a grating of light where I was standing and the sun was starting to fade. We were still at the lagoon and Ralph found a conch in the water he picked it up and blew on it. When then we saw a young boy scared so we asked for his name, he replied scared and terified. So thats when a bunch of boys came over. One of them asked for the person that blew the conch, so Ralph said he did. When then they started talking about how we were going to survive on this island. No one knew but we where all terrified at what was going to happen. So then the boy from the bunch of boys, I guess it was the boys leader said we should probably pick someone that can make decisions about what would happen to use and how we where going to survive in this island. The leader said his name was Jack and then he told us he wanted to be leader, but then the little boys started comming out of trees they looked like little ants looking for food or a way to get throught the day alive. So the boy we had meet first, the one that was teriffied had said that we should have Ralph also be a leader so we choose. The winner to be leader was Raph, I was scared but at the same time exited, to know that maybe we were going to survive. But then also to know that Ralph wanted to explore the island so he left me and Piggy to take names of the little kids that looked like ants. They were all quivering and cold. But once I wanted to ask Ralph if I could go with him he was long gone with Jack and a boy from the bunch of boys that were with Jack. By the name of Simeon, so I had to stay behing and hope they find a way to food and shelter.
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